I am a Year 8 student at Pt England School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Class 3 and my teacher is Mrs Tele'a.
Monday, March 21, 2011
Year 5/6 Camp.
Outside room13 went to see the 5/6 camp. We walked around the field to learn what are we gonna do next year when we go camp. First we went to see the helpers. They told us all the thing that year 5/6 eats. The we went to walk around the tent's, there were lot's of interesting colours to see.We went to see the camp fire. They told us that they are cooking damper and sultanas. They have lot's of yummy food there.
We went for a rest at the marquee meeting tent. If it was wet weather for them they would use this tent.They are so lucky that they can go to swimarama and kayaking.Then we went to look at the interesting tent.We went to peek at the estimated numbers on the tents when they forget which tent to sleep in .
Then we went to the camp fire to see what are they eating.They told us that they are eating damper and sultanas food. When we saw their food it's makes me hungry.They are so lucky that they have yummy food
Then we ran back to class and we wrote about it. I am so gonna be excited when I go to camp next year.When it's next year I am gonna bring of some of my clothes and my sleeping bags for camp next year.
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Hi Jordenne,
ReplyDeleteI really love the way you write and use all those different sentence beginnings. It's good to see that you are so creative during your writing. Keep up the good work!!!
Hi jordenne
ReplyDeleteI like your story about the year 5/6 camp . I like the the way you writ it and it is nice and long
Wish you all the best