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Tuesday, February 21, 2012

The Deadly Hippo






As the tourist rode on a boat in the middle of an African lake, the Hippos chased after them. Surprisingly, hippos are the second most deadly wild animal. Gathering speed, the tourist boat sped away from the advancing beasts.

2 comments:

  1. I didnt know that hippos were the second most deadly wild animal - you learn something new everyday....even at my age! I love your picture of the hippo. Nice story bub. Keep it up. Luv Mummy

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  2. Hi Jordenne ,

    Your story is really awesome and I would like to say that you used lot of cool words I your story and that you have improved from last year . I want to see you doing good and I did not Know that hippos were the second most deadly wild animal .

    Keep up the good work .
    From Lesieli .

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