Friday, November 1, 2013

My own writing: Night Alone Narattive

W.A.L.T: Show not tell when writing a paragraph.

I was walking alone in the darkness, the sun setted and birds going back to their nests. The moon slowly replaced the sun. Heavy winds blew past my face, I wrapped my hands around my body and started shivering, not only shivering with coldness shivering with fear. I looked up seeing trees going back and forth and side to side. It was so dark that I kept on tripping up on some sticks. When I was on the ground I saw a really big dark shadow above me. I looked up and......

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