Thursday, May 19, 2011

The water

Under the sparkly blue water I splashed and kicked all the way to the end.
I coughed and sputtered. My eyes were stinging red as I climbed out of the pool.


  1. Well done Jordenne,
    what a wonderful description you have written about swimming. Your 'stinging red' eyes sounds very sore!
    I get sore eyes when I swim so now I wear goggles. Do you think you could get some goggles?

    Keep up the wonderful writing.

  2. Hey Jojo
    I liked your swimming story and hope that you can now swim! Make sure that you do wear your goggles when you go swimming. When you come to Samoa next we will go to the beach and you can show us how you swim! Love you bub. Mummy xxx