I am a Year 8 student at Pt England School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Class 3 and my teacher is Mrs Tele'a.
Thursday, November 24, 2011
Athletics
Athletics was the best!
Trying my best to run I came 3rd.
Holding on to the softball I threw it far as I could.
Lying down on the grass I felt ichy.
Energy was gone once athletics was finished.
Triple jump was making my legs stretch.
I could really eat ice cream in a very hot sunny day.
Coming first equal with Tyla in high jump I felt happy.
Sweat dripped down my forehead as the sun shine shone on me.
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You did well in your athletics Jo! You're turning out to be a real good athlete like your aunty lana/mummy and daddy!!! :-)
ReplyDeleteGood work on coming first in your high jump baba...
keep up the good work sweetheart.
luv you
mummy
Hey Jordenne!
ReplyDeleteYour graphic really tells and shows what you were feeling on Athletics day! I liked Athletics, and I had LOADS of fun! Did you come 1st, 2nd or 3rd in anything else!
Bye Jordenne!