Tuesday, June 14, 2011

Using Speech in a Paragraph

Taking off with a huge ball of blue and white shiny lights, Jennifer screamed. ‘‘Are you crazy I want to go home’’. Doc laughed ‘‘Are you scared? Don’t worry my adventures never fail and I never give up.” Marty was listening to Jennifer and hugged her close. Doc said,’’Hold on tight’’ as they landed in the future. The End

1 comment:

  1. What a nice short story Jojo. I like how you describe the lights on the ship. Your story sounds so real with Doc/Marty and Jennifer all talking. Love the picture too! Great work bub. Luv mummy